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Hey Jon,
I randomly came across this on craigslist, it's a short story. Click here for the link. This guy has a great sense of timing and dialogue, and he plays with the use of verbs for effect in a really dynamic way. It reminded me a bit to your…
You definitely have a good sense of plot progression, and you create tension really well for a new writer! Here are some thoughts on things you should keep an eye out for:
Timing - not in terms of plot pacing, but in terms of the time over which th…
Not the bunny slippers!!! Protect the slippers at all costs! :) lol
Hi Haley,
Thanks for posting this excerpt from your story. The first thing that struck me about your writing is that you have very clearly played this scene out in your head. You know where objects are placed, how your characters move, what they lo…
I started reading this story while sitting at my desk at work earlier this week, and only got about half way through. I just finished reading the rest of it. There is a definite narrative strength. I know because I didn't need to re-read the first h…
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- At 3:12pm on June 5, 2009,
Laila Mushahwar said…
- Thanks! We met at Insomnia a few weeks back. I'm really excited to read some of the work posted on here.
take care ;)
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I've been working on my latest project and I've actually finished it.
This is only my first draft, the story in relatively short. Only ten short chapters.
I'm going to show you guys the last chapter, it gives some information on the whole
story. I g…
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